Talk:North Petherwin

Football team
The football section looks more detailed than it needs to be.Felix Folio Secundus (talk) 06:52, 24 May 2009 (UTC)


 * I strongly agree so I have boldly removed the essay on North Petherwin Football Club and started a new page. The material was inappropriate to this article about the parish. I have also removed the anecdotal 'travelogue' essay about the countryside. Andy F (talk) 10:26, 1 May 2010 (UTC)

Rewrite
Further to the above, I've now substantially re-written the article. This has meant deleting most of the original unsourced unreferenced text. Much of the original was anecdotal, non-encyclopedic or original research WP:NOR. The otter sanctuary section was effectively advertising WP:ADS. Hence a lot of trimming was required. Andy F (talk) 11:29, 1 May 2010 (UTC)