Talk:North Transfer Station/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 01:24, 4 March 2020 (UTC)

Why not. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  01:24, 4 March 2020 (UTC)


 * I know it's complete, but is it operating?
 * Fixed.
 * I haven't gone through the article yet but I can see the lead is a bit lacking. Maybe you need to add some history to it.
 * Could add some more building features too.
 * Expanded lead.


 * "Community amenities, including the plaza and public artwork, were installed in March 2016 while work continued inside the buildings to install electrical and HVAC systems" Comma after 2016?
 * Or split the sentences to include the progress for each building instead.
 * Rewrote and split the sentence.


 * AGF on offline sources.

What a dump. Nova Crystallis  (Talk)  06:06, 10 March 2020 (UTC)
 * All done. Thanks for the review.  Sounder Bruce  22:18, 10 March 2020 (UTC)