Talk:Northwest Airlines Flight 421/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: ---Dough4872 18:54, 4 December 2009 (UTC) Comments: I am placing the article on hold. ---Dough4872 18:54, 4 December 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) The lead of the article is very short. More information should be added to provide a summary of the article.
 * 2) There are several short paragraphs throughout the article. These should be combined to form longer paragraphs.
 * 3) Are there any pictures that can be added to the article?


 * 1) Expanded the lead with information about the cause of the crash and aftermath of the investigation.
 * 2) The short paragraphs in section "Flight" were consolidated and/or expanded.
 * 3) Commons has no images of Martin 2-0-2 aircraft whatsoever. I uploaded the single schematic from the CAB report (wing root assembly) and put it in. Otherwise, no -- there are no other suitable images available that I know of.

-- Mûĸĸâĸûĸâĸû 20:29, 4 December 2009 (UTC)
 * I will pass the article. ---Dough4872 02:26, 5 December 2009 (UTC)