Talk:Northworld

a slow scrub.
i'm looking to slowly clean this article a bit. it feels like it could use a bit of tightening. but, if anybody wants to make sure that i'm atleast not torturing the rules of grammer too badly go ahead.

but as i progress, should it include the full triology or just the first book? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Steuben.viscosa (talk • contribs) 00:24, 29 November 2008 (UTC)