Talk:Not My Baby/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Kyle Peake (talk · contribs) 10:47, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

Very quickly that we meet again, nice looking article on first glance and I'll review to find any issues soon. --Kyle Peake (talk) 10:47, 7 May 2020 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Remove wikilink on Freedo in the infobox under producer per WP:OVERLINK
 * "is a song recorded by Romanian" → "is a song by Romanian"
 * "issued as a" → "released for digital download as a"
 * "Junior Oliver Frid and" → "Junior Oliver Frid, and"
 * "whilst the latter was credited" → "while the latter received credit"
 * "under his stage name Freedo" → "under his stage name of Freedo"
 * "Reviewers noted "Not My Baby" to be a" → "The song was noted as being a"
 * "song, as well as a" → "track, as well as a"
 * "of the singer's Spanish" → "of Inna's Spanish"
 * "Spanish sixth studio album," → "Spanish studio album" since we don't need full context in the lead and also remove the year from the brackets
 * "Inna had already retransitioned" → "The singer had already retransitioned"
 * "with "Bebe" that same year" → "prior to the song with "Bebe" in 2019"
 * "The lyrics of "Not My Baby" delve" → "The lyrics of the former delve"
 * Target Music critics to Music journalism as the earlier target should be removed
 * "lyric video for the track" → "lyric video for the song"
 * "uploaded to her" → "uploaded to the singer's"
 * "on 2 April" → "on 2 April 2020"
 * "released on 24 April" → "released on 24 April of that year"
 * "seeing Inna with a snake" → "including Inna with a snake"
 * "reviewer further pointed out similarities to the" → "reviewer further pointed out similarities between the visual and the"
 * "Commercially, "Not My Baby" peaked" → "Commercially, the song peaked"
 * Mention that the chart is Romania
 * "in May" → "in May 2020"

Background and composition

 * "produced the song under his stage name Freedo" → "solely produced the song under his stage name of Freedo"
 * "released "Not My Baby" as" → "released "Not My Baby" for digital download as"
 * Wikilink English language to itself
 * "from her Spanish" → "from the Spanish"
 * "her sixth studio album," → "her sixth studio album" since it's not the lead
 * "Lyrically, it touches on" → "Lyrically, the song touches on"
 * "relationship in which" → "relationship, in which"
 * "was attractive yet selfish" → "was attractive but selfish"
 * We don't target to hashtags on pages so target verses to Verse (music) instead
 * Mention how many verses there is, maybe?
 * There is sadly no source that provides this information. Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:48, 9 May 2020 (UTC)


 * Target synthesized to Synthesizer

Critical reception

 * Mention the chart position in here and retitle the section to Reception
 * "Upon release, "Not My Baby" was received with positive reviews by music critics." → ""Not My Baby" was met with universal acclaim from music critics."
 * "best releases in recent memory" → "best releases in recent memory, by April 2020" or something similar to specify "recent" timescale
 * "noting its high" → "noting the high"
 * Remove wikilink on remix
 * "the latter pointed" → "the latter reviewer pointed"
 * "that—while Inna had taken musical inspiration from her older releases—the" → "that while Inna had taken musical inspiration from her older releases, the"
 * "jokingly stating that it" → "jokingly stating that the song"
 * "called the song "perfect [...] for driving, for " → "called the former "perfect" for driving, "for"
 * "which—according to the reviewer—gave "Not My Baby" its" → "which he claimed gave the song its"
 * "He also concluded that the track" → "Krusch concluded that the song"
 * Mention the chart position at the end of this section, but don't start a new para as it's only one sentence

Music video

 * Img needs alt text
 * "from the track's music video" → "from the music video"
 * Add fullstop to end the img's text
 * Wikilink lyric video to itself
 * "created by Mihai Sighinaș was uploaded" → "was created by Mihai Sighinaș and uploaded"
 * "depicts the singer" → "depicts the latter"
 * "and a snake while being" → "and a snake, while being"
 * "video directed by Bogdan Păun was eventually" → "video, directed by Bogdan Păun, was ultimately"
 * "It commences with Inna" → "The visual commences with Inna"
 * "as she sports a" → "while she sports a"
 * "As the music video ends" → "As the video ends"
 * "leopard-print bra, and a" → "leopard-print bra and a"
 * "swimsuit alongside knee-high" → "swimsuit, alongside knee-high"
 * "Currinn of CelebMix called Inna" → "Currinn called Inna" since you have already introduced this reviewer
 * "in the music video" → "within the music video"
 * "for leaving a" → "of leaving a"

Track listing

 * Good

Charts

 * Good

Release history

 * Target Digital download to Music download
 * Target Global to Global Records

Final comments and verdict

 * Quite a thorough article, for now despite the good work! --Kyle Peake (talk) 17:03, 7 May 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for the review. I have solved all your comments except for that one comment. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 13:00, 9 May 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅, as one brief lack of an inclusion isn't too high of importance. --Kyle Peake (talk) 06:18, 10 May 2020 (UTC)