Talk:Not Pictured/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Miyagawa (talk · contribs) 22:27, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

Grabbing this one for a review. Miyagawa (talk) 22:27, 1 July 2015 (UTC)

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Discussion

 * Synopsis
 * Generally this section should be called "Plot".
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 * Also, given the episode's status as the season finale and therefore wrapping up a lot of plot, I think it'd be worthwhile adding a short one paragraph section before this section to cover the background. Mostly just to cover anyone who is jumping into this article for the first time.
 * done Tell me if you want me to add refs to primary sources.
 * Great - only thing now is that you've got actors bracketed in the background and then again in the plot section. Best just to do it once - especially since it'll cut down on the duplicate wikilinks. Miyagawa (talk) 21:06, 3 July 2015 (UTC)
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 * Images
 * Only issue is that you shouldn't put wikilinks in image captions where you've linked elsewhere in the article. Otherwise the images are fine.
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 * Production
 * The quote starting "We knew that Beaver was the killer..." would be better if it was clarified it came from Thomas rather than one of his crew. Miyagawa (talk) 21:06, 3 July 2015 (UTC)
 * done
 * Gia's appearance in the Veronica Mars movie needs a cite.
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 * Reviews
 * The quotes need direct citations.
 * Let me know if that's good enough. BenLinus  1214 talk 21:39, 3 July 2015 (UTC)
 * I'd found a couple that you'd missed - but I added them myself. :) Miyagawa (talk) 21:48, 3 July 2015 (UTC)