Talk:Not Strong Enough (Boygenius song)/GA1

GA Review
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Nominator: 01:48, 6 February 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: The Blue Rider (talk · contribs) 13:56, 31 March 2024 (UTC)

Lead

 * Some tone related suggestions since there are no sources backing up such phrasing:
 * major success → success
 * enjoyed widespread acclaim → enjoyed critical acclaim
 * Good suggestions; I've addressed this by switching the commerical tidbit to "enjoyed success" and the critical one to "was acclaimed". Dylan 620  (he/him • talk • edits) 16:52, 22 April 2024 (UTC)

Background

 * "had all released" sounds akward to me, maybe "each had released their respective albums"? (optional)
 * Done, with some additional tweaks to the prose. Dylan 620  (he/him • talk • edits) 00:17, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Add wikilink to the three singers. (optional)
 * Done. Dylan 620  (he/him • talk • edits) 00:17, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
 * It is worthy to clarify that The Record is an album: "...the album The Record and its..."
 * Done. Dylan 620  (he/him • talk • edits) 00:17, 4 April 2024 (UTC)

Writing and composition

 * Add wikilink to vocal harmonies. (optional)
 * Done. Dylan 620  (he/him • talk • edits) 00:17, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Add wikilink to synthesizers. (optional)
 * Done, and I've added links to other instruments as well. Dylan 620  (he/him • talk • edits) 00:17, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Add wikilink to bridge (music). (optional)
 * Done, with added links to verse and chorus. Dylan 620  (he/him • talk • edits) 00:17, 4 April 2024 (UTC)

Commercial performance

 * Is Billboard's charts the only commercial performance that can be said about the song?
 * Aside from the United States, it only charted in Ireland and on the Japan Hot Overseas chart. There isn't a direct link for each artist's performance on the JHO chart, so the only sources for that chart are the archives of each week's listing. I did find that the song spent nine non-consecutive weeks on that chart spread out over the course of nearly a year, plus it spent two non-consecutive weeks on the Ireland singles chart. I'm off to bed shortly, but I should be able to add more information tomorrow. Dylan 620  (he/him • talk • edits) 00:17, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
 * Noting that I've followed through on this. Dylan 620  (he/him • talk • edits) 22:26, 4 April 2024 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * Who is writing for Consequence?
 * Spencer Dukoff, who is named later in the sentence after a couple commas. Dylan 620  (he/him • talk • edits) 00:17, 4 April 2024 (UTC)
 * I have difficulties seeing this as encyclopedical: "In July 2023, Barack Obama included "Not Strong Enough" on his annual Summer Playlist, to which Dacus tweeted, "war criminal :("."
 * I've removed this for now, although I should note that entering "barack obama summer playlist" into Wikipedia's search engine turned up multiple results for other songs'/artists' inclusions. The way this tidbit had been present in the article was a bit jarring, though, looking at it again. Dylan 620  (he/him • talk • edits) 00:17, 4 April 2024 (UTC)

Music video

 * Add wikilink to tarot cards (optional).
 * Specify that i-D is a magazine.
 * I've taken care of both of these bullets. Dylan 620  (he/him • talk • edits) 20:04, 15 April 2024 (UTC)

Live performances

 * Specify that is Taylor Swift, for moments I thought you were talking about SWIFT.
 * Specified. Dylan 620  (he/him • talk • edits) 20:04, 15 April 2024 (UTC)

Accolades

 * Everything seems good.

Stability

 * Last edited 2 days ago (1 April), no edit wars are in place, pass!  The Blue  Rider  Postal horn icon.svg 18:13, 3 April 2024 (UTC)

Images

 * Three images: two of them with the correct copyright status and suitable captions, but I am not sure about fair rationale's of the music video screenshot, we already have other pictures that identify the articles' subject.
 * Hmmmm. We do have other pictures to identify the band, but as the music video is about the band having fun together, I wanted to use a screencap of them engaging in one of the activities chronicled in the video. Do you have any suggestions? Dylan 620  (he/him • talk • edits) 00:17, 4 April 2024 (UTC)