Talk:Not on Drugs/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 18:34, 30 December 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * It was premiered on 24 February 2014 → The recording premiered on 24 February 2014
 * United States modern rock radio stations → American modern rock radio stations
 * the album's official second single → remove "official"
 * where it reached the number 19. → remove overfluous "the"
 * the same day the publication of → the same day the availability of

Infobox

 * Unlink Tove Lo here

Background and release

 * with the latter two credited → with the latter two being credited
 * the singer said; "He's a Swedish → the singer confessed, "He's a Swedish
 * at Warner/Chappell Studios in Stockholm.[4] The Struts produced and programmed the track and played the → at Warner/Chappell Studios in Stockholm, with The Struts producing and programming it alongside playing the
 * "Habits (Stay High)".[8][9][3][10] → refs in numerical order
 * to United States modern rock radio stations → to American modern rock radio stations
 * a release to US contemporary → a release to American contemporary
 * However, Republic announced → However, the label announced
 * would impact US CHR → would impact the aforementioned radio format
 * official second single → remove "official"
 * from US modern → from American modern

Inspiration and composition

 * opening track in Tove Lo's → "in" to "on"
 * since most of her songs → state "her tracks" here for alternation
 * artist said; "'Not → ; to ,
 * included in "The Love" section on Lo's debut → "on" to "of"
 * and electropop song, with elements → no comma here
 * "exploding" chorus: "Baby, listen → : to ,
 * in the verse "I'm up → comma after "verse"
 * The line "I'm queen → comma after "line"

Reception

 * Lewis Corner of Digital Spy included the track → state "the recording" here for alternation
 * and wrote that; "An exploding → ; to ,
 * Chad Hillard of Hillydilly wrote; "Boasting → ; to ,
 * two on his top 5 → two on his top five
 * Queen of the Clouds that; "Out of all the songs → ; to ,

Music video

 * artist said; "I choked → ; to ,
 * review, writing; "[...] It's → ; to ,

Live performances

 * she performed the song on US music → she performed the song on American
 * in London, UK → no need to mention "UK" here as it's a common term

Credits and personnel

 * flawless ;)

Release history

 * Unlink "Modern rock" here

Copy-violation

 * 34.2% is acceptable!

Images

 * Image from "Inspiration and composition" should be remove as it is overfluous and brings nothing to the article. Additionally, the singer is already presented on the single's cover artwork.

Links

 * No problem here! ;)

Outcome

 * for 7 days! Interesting reading, but needs a little bit of additional work before it can be passed. Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 20:24, 31 December 2016 (UTC)
 * All comments ✅!. Thank you so much for the review! Regards, --Paparazzzi (talk) 00:50, 1 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing! Best, Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:28, 1 January 2017 (UTC)