Talk:Nothing Really Matters/GA1

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Reviewer: Cartoon network freak (talk · contribs) 19:50, 25 December 2016 (UTC)

Lead

 * on March 2, 1999, by Maverick Records → no comma here
 * An EDM song on which Madonna → "track" here for alternation
 * The lyrics are about Madonna's → Lyrically, the recording delves on the singer's
 * and also has → having also
 * declared by reviewers → link "reviewers" to music journalism
 * of airplay, and delay in releasing the CD single; Madonna's fans protested about the delay by Warner Bros. → of airplay and the delay in releasing ii in CD single formats, to which the singer's fans protested against Warner Bros.
 * number-one → number one
 * reached the top spot → reaching the top spot
 * and entered → and entering
 * kimono worn by Madonna → "her" here for alternation

Infobox

 * Alternative text for cover
 * Unlink "Madonna"

Background and writing

 * British producer's → British producers
 * Madonna did not want him to produce the song → use "the track" here for alternation
 * to Madonna, which → "to her" for alternation
 * she had been a fan of Orbit's → she had been a fan of Orbit's work
 * the demo version and started to work on it → the demo version, which he started to work on
 * but De Vries' said; "On all the → to which the latter confessed, "On all the
 * like that... It's quite slow → like that [...] It's quite slow
 * "Nothing Really Matters", and → no comma
 * Elaborating on the statement, she added: → : to ,

Recording and composition

 * The song featured no live → use "the track" here for alternation
 * It is set in the time signature of → remove "the"
 * even tauter..." → ... to [...]
 * The ambient influenced beginning → ambient-influenced
 * fast-pacing dance sound, with the lyrics; "Nothing really → fast-pacing dance sound, over which Madonna sings, "Nothing really
 * In an interview with the Wesleyan University Press, Madonna stated; "There's → "the singer" + ; to :
 * and stated because the single → and concluded that as the single

Release details

 * in six major formats; a 12 inch vinyl → six major formats—a 12 inch vinyl
 * and a digital download → and was made available for digital download
 * album version and the b-side and parent album track → album version, along with the B-side and parent album track
 * four vinyl's → four vinyls
 * that include two tracks on each → "incorporate" here for alternation
 * The CD maxi → The maxi CD
 * by the late Austrian → remove "late"

Critical reception

 * from Metro Weekly, all of them highlighted → remove comma and "all of them"
 * song as one of Madonna's career → "her" for alternation
 * the Billboard Staff → Jason Lipshutz
 * for years to come... → ... to [...]
 * stating "Few singles → comma after "stating"
 * He concluded "It's a great → comma after "concluded"
 * (another song of Ray of Light) → brackets to —
 * reviewed the single release, and awarded it → reviewed the single's release and awarded it
 * previous year (her song "Ray of Light" was nominated, and eventually won the Top Dance Song award). → previous year, when her song...
 * since 1994's Bedtime Stories, that Madonna → no comma
 * certified silver → certified Silver
 * while in the Wallonia region, the song debuted and peaked at number 43 → while in the Wallonia region it had a similar performance
 * The song reached a peak of number 38 → The recording peaked at number 38
 * In Spain, the song debuted at number one → In Spain,it was a number one
 * The next week it descended at → comma after next week" + "at" to "to"
 * present for a total of six → "being" before "present"

Music video

 * The music video → An accompanying music video for "Nothing Really Matters"
 * She later stated; "The whole → ; to ,
 * you're a prisoner... → ... to [...]
 * own moves on the video → "on" to "in"
 * depiction; "...there → depiction, "[...] there
 * her daughter at the time called → commas surrounding "at the time" → at that time
 * consists of Madonna → "the singer" here for alternation
 * "Nothing Really Matters" premiered → The visual for "Nothing Really Matters" premiered
 * fish painting, then shows → "and" before "then"
 * baby but is actually → comma before "but"
 * his review, stating "The → comma after "stating"
 * he concluded "Random? → comma before "Random?
 * answer.Madonna → space
 * commented: "[The → : to ,

Live performance

 * change subtopic's name to "Live performances"
 * ceremony, She came → syntax problems here
 * with William Orbit → no full names here
 * commented about the performance: "Her → remove "about the performance" + : to ,
 * InStyle Staff → InStyle staff

Legacy and other usage in media

 * Songs list; he stated "Copping both → Songs list, stating, "Copping both
 * has be cited → has been cited
 * Madonna took partial creative control → "The singer" here for alternation
 * The shows host → The show's host
 * the geisha look (one contestant wore a geisha look from Madonna's video "Paradise (Not for Me)") → the geisha look, including one sporting a similar look from the singer's music video "Paradise (Not for Me).

Track listings

 * flawless ;)

Charts

 * flawless ;)

Certifications

 * flawless ;)

Copy-violation

 * 30.1% is acceptable!

Links

 * 1 problem here! Please fix!!

Outcome

 * for 7 days! Good luck, Cartoon network freak (talk) 08:55, 30 December 2016 (UTC)
 * ✅ DepressedPer (talk) 09:01, 2 January 2017 (UTC)
 * ✅ and thank you for doing the other changes.  I think we are good to go and as for one dab link, that is for the other uses of template and is fine since that is linking to the actual dab page. — I B   [ Poke  ] 09:11, 2 January 2017 (UTC)
 * Gladly passing! Cartoon network freak (talk) 12:41, 2 January 2017 (UTC)