Talk:NuScale Power/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sturmvogel 66 (talk · contribs) 00:25, 29 September 2015 (UTC)

I'll get to this shortly.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 00:25, 29 September 2015 (UTC)
 * No DABs.
 * ✅ David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 15:33, 11 October 2015 (UTC)


 * One dead link.
 * ✅ I thought it might be a good red-link, but no strong opinion. David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 15:37, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * NuScale widens lead in quest for SMR commercialisation (info) [nuclearenergyinsider.com] No, this external link is dead. Use the external link checker in the GA Toolbox in the upper right.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:47, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Got it. All I could find online is places that have the same dead link, so I just removed the URl. David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 21:09, 11 October 2015 (UTC)


 * Link Limited liability company, patent, reactor vessel, funding round, Ponzi scheme,
 * ✅ David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 15:34, 11 October 2015 (UTC)


 * financial hardship, until new delete the comma.
 * ✅ David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 15:34, 11 October 2015 (UTC)


 * Add a metric conversion for all English measurements. The conversion template could be useful for you:.
 * ✅ David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 15:40, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * You only need to do it once for each measurement. And convert the weight of the reactor as well.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:47, 11 October 2015 (UTC)xt|create steam that turns a turbine, which cranks an electricity generator
 * ✅ David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 21:17, 11 October 2015 (UTC)


 * passive water circulation techniques add a hyphen between water and circulation as they form a compound adjective.
 * ✅ David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 15:41, 11 October 2015 (UTC)


 * The company started making staffing and pay cuts as executives looked for new funding sources.[11][12] Most of the company's employees were laid off within a few months. Link these two sentences together with an "and".
 * ✅ David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 15:41, 11 October 2015 (UTC)


 * That September NuScale obtained Add comma after September.
 * ✅ David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 15:42, 11 October 2015 (UTC)


 * No single sentence paragraphs.
 * ✅ If you feel strongly, I'll also consolidate the first sentence of the Reactors section to avoid a one-sentence paragraph, but I think it works very well the way it is in terms of each paragraph having a distinct topic and that one being a summary/introduction. David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 15:44, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * I think that it flows pretty naturally into the following para and should be merged into it.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:47, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * ✅ David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 21:17, 11 October 2015 (UTC)


 * Generally, one only link for a term. Delink subsequent usages of Nuclear Regulatory Commission, Energy Northwest, DoE.
 * ✅ David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 15:45, 11 October 2015 (UTC)


 * Be consistent about using title case for article titles in your references. More later.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 14:11, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * ✅ David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 15:55, 11 October 2015 (UTC)

Thanks! I really enjoy thorough reviews. Eager to see any other feedback you have! David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 15:56, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Has ground been broken on the facility in Idaho yet?
 * Based on the wording, I don't think so. Do you think we should take it our per crystal ball? David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 21:27, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Probably best not to unless there's been a press release or something announcing that.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:56, 12 October 2015 (UTC)


 * Images appropriately licensed.
 * create steam that turns a turbine, which cranks an electricity generator Link turbine and generator. Language is a little casual here; howzabout "drives an electrical generator."
 * ✅ David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 21:21, 11 October 2015 (UTC)


 * Link U-235. Gotta run, they're kicking me out now.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 20:47, 11 October 2015 (UTC)
 * ✅ David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 21:22, 11 October 2015 (UTC)


 * Link steam generator, barge, rail car, carbon sequestration and all the locations in the Operations section if not already linked.
 * ✅ David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 22:55, 12 October 2015 (UTC)
 * Gotta be careful with links as there are of a variety of things that share the same general name. You want Steam generator (nuclear power).--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 23:08, 12 October 2015 (UTC)


 * The weight of the reactor is in metric tons, not long or short tons?
 * ✅ David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 22:59, 12 October 2015 (UTC)


 * less time, materials and space to construct as other power sources "than" instead of "as"
 * ✅ David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 22:59, 12 October 2015 (UTC)


 * expanded incrementally to adjust to power needs "meet" rather than "adjust"--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 18:56, 12 October 2015 (UTC)
 * ✅ David King, Ethical Wiki (Talk) 23:00, 12 October 2015 (UTC)