Talk:Oṣó/GA2

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 19:11, 1 April 2020 (UTC)

Infobox
✅. I removed Apala and the year recorded.  Versace1608  Wanna Talk? 21:46, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Genres: Apala → if it is inspiration then its not a genre.
 * Recorded	2017–2018 → source?

Lead
✅  Versace1608   Wanna Talk? 21:46, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Add the genres of the album.

Background

 * The source is the same for the first and second sentence, leave it at the end of the second phrase.
 * "as based largely on research" → can you provide a little more information with what this research is about? Perhaps the "research" was his own words?
 * I can't provide anymore information about his "research". Brymo did not go into specifics about what kind of research he did; all he said was that the album was based on research. If you think the statement should be omitted, I can do that.  Versace1608   Wanna Talk? 21:46, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Yes. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:20, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

✅. I just removed the statement about the album being based on research.  Versace1608  Wanna Talk? 21:46, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * The same issue happens again, as pointed out previously in the first instance.
 * References two and six should be in the correct order, first "2" and then "6".
 * I don't know exactly what you mean by this. What exactly do you mean by "correct order"?  Versace1608   Wanna Talk? 21:46, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I did it for you. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 22:46, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

✅

Composition

 * Fine

Singles
✅
 * The album's lead single "Heya!" was released on 28 March 2018 → The album's lead single "Heya!" was released on 28 March 2018, along with its music video.
 * You have duplicate sources as in source 12, 15 and 16 → they are all the same
 * The album's second single "Bá’núsọ" (Yoruba: "Follow Up") was released on 9 September 2018 → The album's second single "Bá’núsọ" (Yoruba: "Follow Up") was released on 9 September 2018, along with its music video.

Critical reception
✅  Versace1608   Wanna Talk? 21:46, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * music critics → link to music journalism

Accolades
✅  Versace1608   Wanna Talk? 21:46, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Create a ref collum and add the source there.

Track listing
✅ with both.  Versace1608  Wanna Talk? 21:46, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * All tracks are written by Ọlawale Ọlọfọrọ → All tracks are written by Ọlawale Ọlọfọrọ and produced by Mikky Me
 * Remove the producer from the tracklist since he is always the same.

Release history
✅  Versace1608   Wanna Talk? 21:46, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * You don't need the tooXclusive source, you have everything from the Itunes one.

Overall

 * The tooXclusive source is good, perhaps a small personnel section with producer, mastering, mixing and that that is on the back cover.
 * Don't address any concerns until I say so.

I understand you might be excited to adress the issues, but I can't be reviwing the article, as I might be going back and forth with you adressing my concerns and you fixing them. Please stepback. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 15:36, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Are you done reviewing the article? I'd like to address your other concerns  Versace1608   Wanna Talk? 16:30, 2 April 2020 (UTC)

No, read above. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 16:39, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I have addressed your concerns to the best of my ability. I'm awaiting for your response, thanks.  Versace1608   Wanna Talk? 19:46, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Did I told you to do so? Can't you respect me? MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 21:19, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * I apologize for editing the page man. I just don't know what other concerns you have with the article.  Versace1608   Wanna Talk? 21:46, 2 April 2020 (UTC)
 * Relax, I'm not going to fail it. It is in pretty good shape, just needs some touches here and there. Add the management and marketing as well to the personnel section. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 14:58, 3 April 2020 (UTC)
 * ✅. I just added the management and marketing info to the personnel section.  Versace1608   Wanna Talk? 22:55, 3 April 2020 (UTC)