Talk:OMG (NewJeans song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Nkon21 (talk · contribs) 20:46, 20 February 2024 (UTC)

Hi, I will be reviewing this GAN! I broke the replay button for this song the entirety of last year...

Comments

 * is a song by the South Korean idol girl group Not sure if "the" or "idol" is needed to be honest, as 99% of other K-pop articles don't use them
 * I took advice from WP:FALSETITLE. Of course not all articles should use them, but I believe it's proper English. Ippantekina (talk) 02:40, 21 February 2024 (UTC)


 * from their single album of the same name → from their single album of the same name (2023)


 * pointing out that they're filming a music video → pointing out that they are filming a music video, per MOS:CONTRACTIONS


 * "OMG" has lyrics in Korean and English → "OMG" contains lyrics in Korean and English


 * Change the website parameter to publisher on ref 7


 * Change the author in ref 9 to Rhian Daly


 * Wrap the apostrophe in Pitchfork's in the "Music and lyrics" section with
 * Replace the website on ref 36 with "Fan N Star"


 * Replace the publisher on ref 37 with website


 * Ref for "January 26, 2023" under music program awards is missing
 * ❌ The Soompi ref needs to be replaced per WP:KO/RS
 * Removed due to lack of reliable sources available. Ippantekina (talk) 03:02, 26 February 2024 (UTC)


 * Add via=Naver to ref 2


 * Ref 26 redirects back to the Circle Chart homepage; add trans-title and rename "publisher" as Circle Chart


 * Write out RIAS as Recording Industry Association Singapore on ref 29


 * Same thing for ref 50


 * Add trans-title and author to ref 39
 * Add author to ref 42
 * Billboard Global 200 – Year-End 2023 → Billboard Global 200 – 2023 on ref 58


 * Billboard Japan Hot 100 – 2023 Year-End → Billboard Japan Hot 100 – 2023 on ref 59


 * Digital Chart 2023 → Digital Chart – 2023 on ref 60


 * All refs should have consistent formatting, so add or substitute publisher=Naver to via=Naver to all refs where it applies (or vice versa)
 * I would suggest adding a promotion and live performances section, as many of them are already listed at List of NewJeans live performances
 * All sources should be archived too
 * My IArchivebot has been plagued with errors for some time now. Could you assist me with this? Ippantekina (talk) 04:20, 21 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Done with the help of another user. Ippantekina (talk) 03:59, 23 February 2024 (UTC)

This is overall a very well-written article so I don't have many comments regarding the prose, just some formatting tweaks and several others. Great work! ɴᴋᴏɴ21 ❯❯❯  talk  22:25, 20 February 2024 (UTC)


 * All should be done now. Thanks for the review :) Ippantekina (talk) 05:56, 23 February 2024 (UTC)
 * Passing now since all my concerns have been addressed. Good job! ɴᴋᴏɴ21  ❯❯❯  talk  04:03, 26 February 2024 (UTC)