Talk:ON TV (TV network)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 20:09, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week.  Some Dude From North Carolina  (talk) 20:09, 11 March 2021 (UTC)

Infobox and lead

 * Infobox looks good.
 * Add a comma after "sporting events".

History

 * "majority owned" "majority-owned"
 * Add commas after "January 31, 1982", "Detroit, Cincinnati", and "Los Angeles, Chicago".
 * "under construction" "under-construction"
 * "shuttered March" "shuttered on March"
 * "keep services" "keeping services"
 * "southern California" "Southern California"

Service and programming

 * Add a comma after "Los Angeles, Phoenix".
 * The phrase "did not pay simply received no" sounds wordy, so try rewording.

Equipment

 * "manufactuers" "manufacturers"
 * "California governor" "California Governor"
 * Remove the comma after "particularly Chartwell in Detroit".

Stations

 * Add commas after "Lakers", "September 9, 1979", "minor league baseball", "Blackhawks", and "children's programs".
 * "operating January" "operating on January"
 * "court ordered" "court-ordered"
 * This is the only one I didn't change, as it is a subject and verb, not an adjective ("a court ordered Desmond to..."). I'm not a personal Oxford comma fan, but I went ahead and made the changes.