Talk:OSTO System Model

Too technical and needs simplification as well as other issues
This article needs attention. It is written in a post-graduate academic and somewhat abstruse style that makes it very difficult to understand. As per WP:TECHNICAL: If an article is written in a highly technical manner, but the material permits a more understandable explanation, then editors are strongly encouraged to rewrite it. The article contains a lot of Jargon, and too much detail. Accordingly, I added the template.

Aside from being overtechnical, it has other problems that need addressing. For instance it uses excessive wikilinking and has language, style, and copy edit issues.

Coastside (talk) 09:15, 6 January 2019 (UTC)