Talk:OS T1000/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: ---Dough4872 16:40, 16 November 2009 (UTC) Comments: I am placing the article on hold. ---Dough4872 16:40, 16 November 2009 (UTC)
 * 1) "and scrapped the following", add "year" after "following".
 * 2) "The background was the plans to connect the eastern and western networks" sounds awkward.
 * 3) The sentence "They received a new front, the doors moved and the train equipped with a pantograph." sounds awkward.
 * 4) In the History section, you have "Oslo Tramway" linked twice. Can you delink the second instance?
 * 5) "The Røa Line was finished upgraded"? Either finished or upgraded should be removed.
 * 6) In the first paragraph of the Specifications section, you begin three sentences with "Each car". Can you change at least one of them?
 * Done. Thank you for the review :) Arsenikk (talk)  20:10, 16 November 2009 (UTC)
 * I will pass the article. ---Dough4872 21:12, 17 November 2009 (UTC)