Talk:Oak Lawn (Washington, D.C.)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: REDMAN 2019 (talk · contribs) 13:16, 4 December 2020 (UTC)

I'll take a look at this one. REDMAN 2019 ( talk ) 13:16, 4 December 2020 (UTC)

17th-19th centuries

 * Ref 1 needs a author.
 * Ref 2 has no url.
 * Except for the last sentence, the third paragraph is entirely unsourced.

20th-21st centuries

 * The second paragraph also is unsourced except for the last sentence
 * Ref 14, 27, 28 and 29 have no urls or accessdates.

Main article

 * There are quite a few sentences with 4, 5 or even 6 references. Per WP:SYNTH it's best just to have one, two at max.

Comments
There are a few issues to be addressed here, mainly with the sourcing. So I'm putting this on hold for now. REDMAN 2019 ( talk ) 12:40, 6 December 2020 (UTC)


 * Ok, I think the issues have been corrected. Take a look when you get a chance. Thank you.  APK  whisper in my ear  06:10, 7 December 2020 (UTC)
 * Well done. In my opinion this article now meets GA criteria. Passing. REDMAN 2019  ( talk ) 12:15, 7 December 2020 (UTC)