Talk:Obsesii/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Paparazzzi (talk · contribs) 02:30, 26 March 2020 (UTC)

Expect a review soon. --Paparazzzi (talk) 02:30, 26 March 2020 (UTC)

Lead and infobox

 * " the black and white clip sees Stan and several dancers..." replace "sees" with "depicts"
 * "on the native Airplay 100 chart." Replace "native" with another word that implies the chart is Romanian
 * Is "local" alright?


 * The artwork needs an Alt description

Background and reception

 * Lucan prdoduced
 * Isn't there any other information about how this song was created? I'm talking about an interview, maybe, where Alexandra or one of the producers describe the process of making this song
 * I follow her activity closly and sadly she didn't talk further on the song's creation. This is very unfortunate, and is the case with several of her tracks.


 * I'm not sure about the reliability of CelebMix. Is it actually reliable?
 * I've had this discussion with several people, and we never gotten to a consensus. However, I used CelebMix for my past article due to the fact that Jonathan Currinn, is a journalist and reviewer with a degree and because he always cites his sources if what he writes isn't a review.


 * You could add more information about the performance of the song on the Romanian chart: the date and position it debuted at, the date it reached its peak position, how many weeks it lasted on the chart...
 * Added. The song is still running on the chart.


 * Mention the length and the genre of the track, they are both vital information for songs
 * I mentioned the length, however I cannot include the genre without a source to back it up.

Music video

 * the clip sees Stan... same as above
 * "They wear loose shirts to symbolize freedom." According to who? the singer herself or an editor of some website?
 * InfoMusic is a source which reports news and press conferences, I think they wrote about that the label sent them. It's safe to not name any author.


 * Is Aficia reliable?
 * It's the same as with CelebMix


 * Could you add information about the performances of the song? I'm referring to the costumes, stage, etc
 * There was unfortunately nothing too spectacular about these performances, and there is no source going in detail with what she wore etc.


 * "Furthermore, she appeared on Kiss FM later that month" so she performed the song there or just gave an interview? this sentence is not very clear
 * Fixed.

Credits

 * Spotify only showed me the songwriters, and with YouTube it was really hard to find the credits and it does not mention Radu Bolfea as a producer. I would rather use Tidal as the source for the credits. Here is the link.
 * If you are going to use the term "songwriter" which includes both composers and lyricists, then remove "composer"
 * Fixed it another way

Verdict
Putting this on hold until my comments are addressed. Regards, Paparazzzi (talk) 04:21, 26 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Thank you very much for the review. I solved anything unless where commented on. Greets; Cartoon network freak (talk) 15:02, 31 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Nomination is passed. Congratulations! --Paparazzzi (talk) 23:35, 2 April 2020 (UTC)