Talk:Occupational injustice

WP:Class assignment
Hi,. After reading through your article Lyoh and SWhit2014 suggest: 1. Describing Occupational Apartheid and Occupational Imbalance 2. Defining occupation somewhere in your intro paragraph for those who don't know the profession of OT 3. Finally, the part on Occupational Marginalization is confusing. Perhaps, re-word and/or give examples.SWhit2014 (talk) 21:58, 23 November 2014 (UTC)