Talk:October 2008 Central America floods/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 05:43, 12 December 2013 (UTC)

Hello Hurricanehink, I will be reviewing and assessing this article against the Good Article criteria. There are only a few issues, so overall, you did a great job!
 * "Floods in Costa Rica damaged 32 ridges and roads in 174 locations" – Ridges?
 * Oops :/ --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 05:48, 12 December 2013 (UTC)
 * For the damage tolls, are the conversions to USD mentioned? If not, leave a note about where conversions can be made.
 * Actually, the USD are in the sources listed! --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 05:48, 12 December 2013 (UTC)
 * "The rains followed Tropical Storm Arthur striking the country in May, and a bridge rebuilt after Arthur was again flooded." - Kinda of oddly worded. The first part seems to suggest that Tropical Storm Arthur was related to the flooding. The second part needs to be reworded somehow.
 * Clarified. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 05:48, 12 December 2013 (UTC)
 * "Around the time when the NHC began issuing advisories, officials issued" - Wait, what is NHC? Also, state when the advisories began.
 * It's in the MH section. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 05:48, 12 December 2013 (UTC)
 * "When the NHC began issuing advisories on the depression, the agency anticipated the depression would intensify into a strong tropical storm" - This seems a little redundant because, (1. You already stated something else when the NHC began advisories; and (2. Wouldn't that be why tropical storm warnings were issued for northern Honduras and Belize?
 * Just further explanation about how they thought the system would be set up. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 05:48, 12 December 2013 (UTC)
 * "visited several towns,[62] provdiing help to 3,000 people" - Typo
 * Ack. Spellcheck failed me. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 05:48, 12 December 2013 (UTC)
 * "of assistance, including to provide shelter in Honduras and rebuilding schools." - "including to provide" ---> "including providing"
 * Sure! --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 05:48, 12 December 2013 (UTC)
 * "In November, weeks after the tropical depression struck Honduras, Tropical Storm Paloma formed in the western Caribbean and caused additional rainfall in the region.[66]" - Is this supposed to be in the Aftermath?
 * It is. It indicates another meteorological event that I thought was worth mentioning in prose. It's like mentioning the nor'easter that affected New Jersey just weeks after Sandy. --♫ Hurricanehink ( talk ) 05:48, 12 December 2013 (UTC)