Talk:Ocular tremor

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Hello all! I am a student editor who will be editing this article as a project for my advanced writing class. Please reach out to me if I am making any etiquette mistakes, formatting mistakes, etc. I noticed this page is primarily written off of primary sources (including a blog post), which I will be removing. I plan to add information from secondary sources. Please note my plan below:


 * Remove all current sources that are primary sources (including blog post)
 * Remove entire section on Simon Cooke - this was from the blog post
 * Confirm whether article needs to be changed to "Ocular microtremor" instead of "Ocular tremor"
 * Review current information to see if it corroborates with my secondary sources
 * Keep all that is confirmed
 * Erase all that is not (investigate for this information in other secondary sources, first)
 * Write any additional information using the secondary sources I found
 * Add in-text citations
 * Add in-text links to other articles:
 * nystagmus, parkinson's, MS, microsaccade, eye movements, fixational eye movements
 * Choose how to divide up sectioning: general intro section, abnormal tremor, related kinds of eye movements (?)
 * Decide whether to keep current image (is it relevant?)

Please feel free to leave any suggestions! GreenWaterBottle2 (talk) 04:15, 6 November 2021 (UTC)


 * Sounds like a good plan! With respect to the current image, it is relevant, but seems distorted. That is, everything that should be a straight line (like the underlining and the lines on the scale) is not straight. Those distortions probably also changed the waveform of the tremor, which means this probably isn't a real example of tremor anymore (or it's enhanced, or something). ParticipantObserver (talk) 21:59, 8 November 2021 (UTC)

Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment
This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 8 September 2021 and 19 December 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): GreenWaterBottle2.

Above undated message substituted from Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org assignment by PrimeBOT (talk) 10:18, 18 January 2022 (UTC)