Talk:Ode to the Mets/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 13:31, 17 August 2022 (UTC)

Lead and infobox

 * Link Julian Casablancas


 * Prefer the active voice over passive voice i.e. "The band first performed the song live at a 2019 New Year's Eve concert at Barclays center"

Background

 * Lead says "waiting on the MTA" which is not mentioned here. For a non-New Yorker this is confusing.
 * ✅ — Changed to a more neutral term, simply mentioning "a subway train" while also linking to the specific subway line.


 * “something that you set your heart to and that you love unconditionally but that continues to disappoint you.” lacking source
 * ✅ — Was supposed to be covered by the Sports Illustrated source placed at the end of the previous sentence, now corrected.

Composition

 * "guitarist Albert Hammond Jr. emulates a Mellotron cello patch with an Electro-Harmonix MEL9 pedal, which guitarist Nick Valensi had previously used for the title track on the band's previous album, Comedown Machine" lacking source
 * Removed. Seems this was fan speculation added by another user.

Reception

 * Great.

Personnel

 * Great.

Chart performance

 * Great.

Overall

 * for seven days. Ippantekina (talk) 15:03, 18 August 2022 (UTC)
 * All issues have been addressed. Aria1561 (talk) 18:01, 18 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks for addressing everything. I have a remaining query regarding the reliability of Spectrum Culture. Ippantekina (talk) 01:42, 19 August 2022 (UTC)
 * Great work with the article. Passing-- Ippantekina (talk) 06:37, 19 August 2022 (UTC)