Talk:Office of Transition Initiatives

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The language of this article appears to be language that might be used by OTI itself to describe its work, but the article does not include phrases like "self-described" or "according to OTI." It does not cite sources of information on OTI's overall mission, for example. Parts of the article read like public relations type materials. There are criticisms out there about OTI that are not referenced in this article. — Preceding unsigned comment added by 96.255.248.171 (talk) 16:38, 9 July 2016 (UTC)