Talk:Offshore installation security

Leade re-write
The language in what can be a very good article is very tortured. I re-wrote the lead and fully realize it too may be further improved. Please consider doing so. Kind regards to all.Hu Nhu (talk) 18:16, 29 February 2020 (UTC)
 * I continued with improving this article and, after perusing the appropriate Wikipedia pages which describe the protocol for template removal, removed the templates regarding the article's problems. This article, of course, may be further improved; however, it is is currently a version which has seen significant improved.Hu Nhu (talk) 13:06, 1 March 2020 (UTC)