Talk:Ogrodzieniec, Warmian-Masurian Voivodeship

Lead styling
As of the last version I looked at, the lead begins: "Ogrodzieniec (Neudeck) is a village in the administrative district of Gmina Kisielice, within Iława County, Warmian-Masurian Voivodeship, in northern Poland. Previously called Neudeck, it was renowned as the country residence of German President Paul von Hindenburg, who died there in 1934."

This is problematic because: I think what I'd do with it is this (and it's pretty typical of how we handle such things): "Ogrodzieniec is a village in the administrative district of Gmina Kisielice, within Iława County, Warmian-Masurian Voivodeship, in northern Poland. Previously known by its German name, Neudeck [give pronunciation here with - most English speakers will expect /niu-dek/, but it's actually /noi-dek/], it was renowned as the country residence of German President Paul von Hindenburg, who died there in 1934."
 * 1) Mentioning Neudeck twice in the lead is redundant.
 * 2) We don't italicize the alternate-language version unless the first one given is English ("Munich (München) is..."), in which case the italicization is sufficient emphasis.
 * 3) The city is not presently also named Neudeck; that's a historical name.

— SMcCandlish ☺ ☏ ¢ ≽ʌⱷ҅ᴥⱷʌ≼  07:09, 29 December 2015 (UTC)