Talk:Oh Santa!/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Sauloviegas (talk • message • contribs • count  • [/wiki/Special:Log?user= logs ] • email) 20:13, 29 August 2011 (UTC)

Lead

 * "Mariah Carey: Merry Christmas to You.". -> "Mariah Carey: Merry Christmas to You".
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  23:31, 3 September 2011 (UTC)

Background and composition

 * via iTunes in December 2010. -> via iTunes in December 17, 2010.
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  23:32, 3 September 2011 (UTC)

Reception

 * "Overall, the song has received very positive reception from music critics worldwide." I think it would be better if it was like this: " "Oh Santa!" has received positive reviews from music critics.", since all the reviews are positive and only from the US. Also, link music critics.
 * ✅ Re-worded. Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  23:32, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Link Celine Dion.
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  23:32, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
 * For the week ending January 1, 2011 -> On the dated week of January 1, 2011
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  23:32, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
 * on the Billboard Hot 100 singles chart. -> on Billboard Hot 100
 * ❌ I don't think that makes much sense to read. Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  23:32, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Ok. :) - Sauloviegas (talk) 02:34, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

Music video

 * You repeated Carey/Mariah way too much! :) You should replace Mariah with Carey, and avoid the continued use of the name/surname so much. Try to replace with she or the singer when appropriate. Otherwise, this section is pretty great. I think a screenshot would be good to visually identify the most significant part of the music video. But that is your choice. :)
 * ✅ I don't know how to upload pictures on here, but I agree that a screenshot would be really good, perhaps one with Mariah on stage with the dancers and band around her. Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  23:35, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Added. :) - Sauloviegas (talk) 10:35, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

Track listings

 * You referenced the digital download, but where is the reference for the promo cd single?
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  23:36, 3 September 2011 (UTC)

Charts

 * Re-organize the main charts alphabetically. The component charts must stay after Billboard Hot 100 as it is.
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  23:36, 3 September 2011 (UTC)

Comments

 * You did an outstanding job with this article. I know how it's hard to gather all the information you can for a single that didn't gained media attention so much. Keep up with the amazing work. :) - Sauloviegas (talk) 22:12, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Oh thanks for reviewing! I didn't know the article had been reviewed! Thanks, I will do the fixes now. Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  23:27, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
 * ✅ I had done some of the points without knowing they were points to address in general edits of the article! Ha. Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  23:38, 3 September 2011 (UTC)
 * I expanded the Critical reception, so if you could check that please. Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  02:36, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Yes, I see that! Great expansion, by the way! :) - Sauloviegas (talk) 10:13, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Thanks :) Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  12:44, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

Lead

 * received mixed to positive review from music critics -> received mixed to positive reviews from music critics.
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  12:41, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Link music critics
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  12:41, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

Critical reception

 * received mixed to positive review from music critics -> received mixed to positive reviews from music critics.
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  12:43, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Link music critics
 * ❌ Only needs to be linked the first time, which is in the Lead. Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  12:43, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
 * listed "Oh Santa!" was one of the recommended tracks on the album. This doesn't make much sense... Can you re-write it?
 * ✅ Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  12:43, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

Music video

 * It would be nice if you add some reviews of the music video. :)
 * *: ✅ Added 3. Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  12:46, 4 September 2011 (UTC)

'''Thanks again. Have added 3 video reviews, they are quite hard to find, especially after a year, they have become even harder. Also made the Music video into 3 sub-sections. And thanks for adding in the screenshot!''' Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  12:46, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
 * You're welcome! The article looks so much better now. Outstanding work! Passing... :) - Sauloviegas (talk) 15:58, 4 September 2011 (UTC)
 * Wooo thanks! Calvin  &bull; Na Na Na C'mon!  16:01, 4 September 2011 (UTC)