Talk:Ohio State Route 633/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MusikAnimal (talk · contribs) 04:12, 4 December 2013 (UTC)

This is my first GA review, so I have selected a shorter nominee. I will be thorough and honest in my assessment, and please let me know of any differences in opinion. &mdash; MusikAnimal talk 04:12, 4 December 2013 (UTC)

Issues
Lead:
 * &ldquo;Its northern terminus is also in Wickliffe, this time at a signalized intersection with Lakeland Boulevard...&rdquo;
 * Please lend your opinion, but I don't much care for the usage of the wording this time. Replacing it with a simple but sounds more appropriate. That being said, I'm no grammar expert.
 * Fixed.&mdash; CycloneIsaac – E-Mail 21:27, 4 December 2013 (UTC)

Under Route description:
 * &ldquo;... not included in the National Highway System [which are] deemed most important for the economy, mobility, and defense of the nation ...&rdquo;
 * A few concerns. Perhaps there is no harm in clarifying that, despite its name, State Route 633 is not part of the National Highway System – but I feel it may be getting a little off-subject. It may also lend undue weight toward the national system ("deemed most important"), and lastly the provided reference does not mention any of this.
 * Removed.&mdash; CycloneIsaac – E-Mail 21:27, 4 December 2013 (UTC)


 * &ldquo;... 6,320 vehicles travel on SR 633 on average every year&rdquo;
 * I'm confused about the reference here, which appears to be an interactive map. There's a lot of buttons but I don't see any way to reveal travel data. Am I missing something?


 * 1) Go to the traffic tab on the left.
 * 2) Click the square, and drag over an area (for this case, SR 633)
 * 3) Look for SR00633
 * 4) Profit.
 * Or I could just cite the actual traffic report instead.&mdash; CycloneIsaac – E-Mail 21:27, 4 December 2013 (UTC)

Under History:
 * &ldquo;This routing is designated as state highway by the 1932 map&rdquo;
 * Potential problem with grammar. However minor, it sounds like there should be an a before state highway? I could be wrong.
 * Fixed.&mdash; CycloneIsaac – E-Mail 21:27, 4 December 2013 (UTC)

&mdash; MusikAnimal talk 05:41, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
 * All fixes done.&mdash; CycloneIsaac – E-Mail 22:14, 4 December 2013 (UTC)
 * Looks good! Let me double check these references and I think we're good to go :) &mdash; MusikAnimal talk 15:21, 5 December 2013 (UTC)