Talk:Ohio State Route 710

Suggested fixes
Have fun! T C  N7 JM  21:25, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) If you use a certain parameter, one that breaks para if I try to copy it down, you can correctly write 4.06-mile-long in the first sentence of the lead. See the source of this article's lead for details.✅
 * 2) The lead should be the place in the article where you are the most specific, yet the most concise. This is why you should use the exact establishment year, 1969, in the lead.✅
 * 3) The prose looks a bit choppy, especially in the route description. The second sentence could easily be split in two.✅
 * 4) You should elaborate a bit on some physical surroundings. Residential areas? Business areas? What kind of terrain? Hilly? Flat? You don't have to do this for every sentence, but details are nice every once in a while.
 * 5) Use a shorter preposition than "along" in the junction list.✅
 * Do I add #4 in the route description? CycloneIsaac – E-Mail 23:09, 8 June 2013 (UTC)
 * Generally, yes. T  C  N7 JM  00:13, 9 June 2013 (UTC)