Talk:Okatoma Creek

Improving the article's tone
Manual of Style should be consulted to improve the tone of this article. The major concerns are: Another suggestion for improvement is to describe the physical characteristics of the creek. How long is it? Where is it located? Truthanado (talk) 02:21, 13 April 2008 (UTC)
 * It is like an advertisement with several peacock terms. It should be changed to be encyclopedic, stating factual information and letting the reader draw their own conclusions.
 * Two web links are advertisements to rafting companies. They should be removed.

I added citations to the existing article where possible, but I think it really needs a much more in-depth rewrite. A lot of the article still reads like an advertisement to tourists. Thesparrow27 (talk) 05:00, 19 February 2024 (UTC)