Talk:Oklahoma State Highway 132/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: TCN7JM (talk · contribs) 20:31, 11 April 2013 (UTC)

Gladly. T C  N7 JM  20:31, 11 April 2013 (UTC)


 * Route description
 * 1) First of all, this is a pretty short route description for a 65.3-mile route. Is the route really this...boring?
 * 2) The second-to-last sentence of the first paragraph is missing a capitalized word at the beginning of the sentence.
 * 3) I know Kansas has this, but maybe Oklahoma doesn't. Is there someway to tell what kind of railroad track the route crosses?
 * 4) "returning to due north" sounds weird. I'd try to reword this a bit.
 * 5) Easily avoidable ing phrase in the second to last sentence.


 * History
 * 1) Another ing in the second sentence.

Lookin' goooood. This one'll go on hold for you to fix this stuff. T C  N7 JM  21:18, 11 April 2013 (UTC)
 * Everything fixed except the ing...is there a reason that should be avoided? As far as I know it's perfectly grammatical. —Scott5114↗ [EXACT CHANGE ONLY] 22:38, 11 April 2013 (UTC)
 * At second glance, both these instances are fine. I was a little trigger happy. I will pass the article now. T  C  N7 JM  22:47, 11 April 2013 (UTC)