Talk:Ola Ince

Current WP:LEAD
@Ipigott Hi, thanks for your note. My current read is that the lead, though short, does summarize the key points of the current content. What would you add? Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 17:19, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

Then again, how's that? Gråbergs Gråa Sång (talk) 17:26, 2 June 2024 (UTC)


 * Yes, that's better. You could perhaps also mention the recent successes covered in the body of the article. As many readers go no further than the lead, it's always useful to provide a few details.--Ipigott (talk) 05:27, 3 June 2024 (UTC)