Talk:Olaf's Frozen Adventure/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 13:39, 22 July 2021 (UTC)


 * "who praised for its" "who praised it for its"
 * #Plot is 296 words so that passes WP:FILMPLOT.
 * "Olaf and Sven decides" "Olaf and Sven decide"
 * Add a serial comma between "Christmas, Hanukkah and Winter solstice".
 * "a television special, to be aired on ABC, produced by Roy Conli, and directed by Kevin Deters and Stevie Wermers" – reword
 * "limited time theatrical release" "limited theatrical release"
 * "the story follows Olaf as he tries to find the best holiday traditions for Anna, Elsa, and Kristoff" — is a summary needed?
 * – make a WP:CITEBUNDLE.
 * ✅. Pamzeis (talk) 01:48, 23 July 2021 (UTC)


 * Resolve the "" tag.
 * Add a hyphen between "limited time" in #Release.
 * Remove the links to Pixar and Coco in #Release (WP:OVERLINK).
 * "apologies, and removed the short from exhibition" "apologies and removed the short from the exhibition"
 * "It was viewed 5.64 million times." "It was viewed by an estimated 5.64 million people in the United States."
 * The Rotten Tomatoes score is wrong (actually 7 reviews, not 10; 5.1 average, not 5.12).
 * "betteroff" "better off"
 * "contributions on the project" "contributions to the project"
 * "incoperated" "incorporated"
 * "as Tesco-exclusive" "as a Tesco-exclusive"
 * "the United Kingdom December 7, 2017" "the United Kingdom on December 7, 2017"
 * Metro has been found to be an unreliable source.
 * Update the British Board of Film Classification link.
 * Sources are archived.
 * #12 should be properly cited.
 * Mark references from The Telegraph with "|url-access=registration".
 * Is LaughingPlace reliable?
 * Those are my notes. Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 18:23, 22 July 2021 (UTC)
 * , ✅. Wingwatchers (talk) 21:10, 22 July 2021 (UTC)