Talk:Olango Island Group/GA1

GA Review
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 * 1) The refs are not formatted into citation templates such as cite web.
 * 2) References go after the period, like this .[1], not like this [1].
 * 3) "Fabulous dive sites" - highly PoV even if that is what the source says.
 * 4) Can the "Barangays" section be prosified?
 * 5) "Livelihood" seems like a slanted term for a header.
 * 6) Needs a major copy edit overall, I see several grammar errors.

I'm placing this on hold for a week. Ten Pound Hammer and his otters • (Broken clamshells•Otter chirps) 14:03, 13 July 2008 (UTC)
 * The article has some major issues with PoV still ("fabulous dive sites", etc.) and prose-wise, I don't think it's quite enough for GA, so I'm failing it. Ten Pound Hammer  and his otters • (Broken clamshells• Otter chirps • HELP!) 19:43, 1 August 2008 (UTC)