Talk:Old All Saints Church, Nuneham Courtenay

Careless writing
In the History section we have: "In 1880 the third parish church was built, this time in the village, and this church was converted for use as a private chapel for the family and refurnished." It is not clear what is meant by "this church" in the scond clause. From context one expects it to mean the 18th-c. church, but the church referred to in the first clause of the quoted sentence is the 1880 building. I am confused so won't do the correction, but I assume someone who is certain of the facts will clarify the text. Axel 20:43, 16 May 2011 (UTC) —Preceding unsigned comment added by AxelHarvey (talk • contribs)
 * Difficult to express (rather than careless!). I have added a few words in an attempt to clarify.  If this does not work for you, what do you suggest? --Peter I. Vardy (talk) 07:37, 17 May 2011 (UTC)