Talk:Old Latium

Copyediting
I rewrote the begining of the article, which was a surprisingly tough project on its own, as the article is written in a way that there was not a single sentence that had any logical connection to the one before it. This article also needs heavy copyediting as most of its 'size' is made up of meaningless, useless, or arbitrary terms that do not promote the article in any way. High language does not mean an article is a good one, in this case it just covers up many mistakes and bad wordings.

It is also missing a Geography section and has trouble in acting as an independent region as most of the article speaks of Latium as a whole and not on Old Latium. This article needs a lot of work and attention as it's an important article on ancient history, I hope whoever reads this will help out on this project.  Flag  Flayer  20:32, 5 April 2017 (UTC)