Talk:Old Love / New Love/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MarioSoulTruthFan (talk · contribs) 11:00, 17 June 2018 (UTC)

Hello, I'll be reviewing this article in the nearby future. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 11:00, 17 June 2018 (UTC)

Infobox
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 * On producer: Dennis Herring → Herring

Lead
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 * them → who?
 * music critics → link to music journalism

Background and composition
✅. Noticed the reason for no sample. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 19:34, 22 June 2018 (UTC)
 * Split both sections into their own.
 * There is no need to use 4 or 5 sources to back up the same thing, three is more than enough.
 * house beat] → house beat
 * Jamie Milton described it as a "gigantic trance chorus",[34] and Dan Reilly → I assume they are music critics for magazines but there is no reference to it.
 * Could add a sound of the song to the composition section, however, not mandatory.

Release and promotion
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 * ""Old Love / New Love" was released by Shadow as single" → The last source contradicts the statement you made, as it only says it was only released as a single for the videogame.
 * No need to use source 41, just copy the Billboard one (number 36) here.

Critical reception
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 * "According to him, when it happens it is positive, and also added the conclusion is better," → what is positive and negative and why? I don't understand
 * "Alex Young mentioned it was more suitable for the dance clubs than "six-star killing spree." → which publications, magazines they wrote this for?
 * " Gerrit Feenstra noted "Old Love / New Love" as "one of the finest tracks" from it, a feeling Pat Levy" → same as previous
 * "one of the finest tracks" from the it" → "one of the finest tracks" from it
 * "After the release of Eclipse Embling" → After the release of Eclipse, Embling
 * "Ian Gormely considered Shadow created a "sublime catharsis"; Heather Phares lauded its contemporary sound" → missing one source.
 * Jayson Greene labeled it as "sexy" → from Pitchfork
 * Be sure to link every writer to a publication as most of the critics, writer for various magazines.
 * "several music critics graded "Old Love / New Love" as a highlight from Eclipse" → three sources is enough.

Track listing

 * Fine.

Credits
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 * Always use small caps to begin the sentence. (Wynne Bennett – Keyboards → Wynne Bennett – keyboards).
 * Use – (click to copy and edit)

Overall

 * Address the comments, ping me when you are done. MarioSoulTruthFan (talk) 20:30, 19 June 2018 (UTC)
 * All done except Metrolyrics', the link is missing the LF logo requested by MetroLyrics song; the use of – which was already there; and the audio file, as I don't know how to do .ogg. ©  Tb hotch ™ (en-2.5). 23:25, 20 June 2018 (UTC)