Talk:Old National Library Building

Tone problems
Large parts of this article do not have an encyclopedic tone. Some examples:
 * "the rare display of civic activism on its preservation became a watershed event in generating greater awareness of Singapore's heritage and its conservation in future."
 * The section headline: "Gone but not forgotten"
 * "the city planners got the message loud and clear - To think with the head and heart in future."
 * "as a symbolic gesture of the new connecting with the old and its legacy in the hearts of Singaporeans."

These sound like their coming from a memorial for the building.--Carabinieri 15:09, 28 June 2007 (UTC)
 * As per highlighted concerns, I've make the neccesary amendments on the tone of my article. Thk u for your feedback. -- Aldwinteo 17:36, 28 June 2007 (UTC)