Talk:Old age and driving

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Old Man's Car?
The link to the 'Old Man's Car' is irrelevant and should be removed — Preceding unsigned comment added by 96.255.19.147 (talk) 01:40, 15 June 2018 (UTC)

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Peer Review - UCSF School of Medicine

Chris H’s Peer Edits -Confirmed the citation used to provide information on the gradual deterioration of the eye and development of cataracts (14) -Corrected one grammatical error in the “Senses, Physical abilities, Cognition” section -Broke one sentence that was a run-on into two sentences. I think this improved the clarity of the message. -Suggestion for improvement - I think that in the “Senses, Physical abilities, Cognition” section, a brief discussion of what types of impairment are most likely to occur and which ones cause the greatest difficulty of older adults who drive.

Pat L’s Peer Edits -Added a comma to “There are a multitude of conditions that correlate with old age and have negative effects on senses, physical abilities, and driving capabilities” -Suggestion: ”With aging, the lens of the eye loses its transparency and becomes cloudy, a condition commonly known as cataracts.” This sentence seems a bit runon-y. Maybe try to restructure it.

Nigel A’s Peer Edits -Changed “The four senses (excluding taste) are important for safe driving:” to The following are two senses that are important for safe driving: -changed to “With aging, the lens of the eye loses its transparency and becomes cloudy, and condition commonly known as cataracts” to “With aging, the lens of the eye loses its transparency and becomes cloudy, a condition commonly known as cataracts.”

This article focuses on the US. It would be good to make it more international.
For instance, Japan has the world’s oldest population and is grappling with the safety of elderly drivers: https://www.bbc.com/worklife/article/20191025-how-japan-is-handling-more-ageing-drivers Jojuj (talk) 23:29, 17 November 2021 (UTC)