Talk:Oligohydramnios

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between 25 October 2021 and 20 November 2021. Further details are available on the course page. Student editor(s): Aziz.hadia. Peer reviewers: Hollireynolds7.

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TCOM Medical Student Editing Oligohydramnios
Aziz.hadia (talk) 02:42, 31 October 2021 (UTC)

Peer Review
General info

Whose work are you reviewing? Aziz.hadia/Oligohydramnios

Peer Review

Lead:
 * I think the lead of this article is beautiful
 * Great flow and hit all the main points

Content:
 * Content is also impressive but I do feel you could add more links to some of the more difficult terms. To a person in the medical field, it perfectly understandable, but it may be more difficult for the average user to follow. I believe links to terms will help with this.

Tone and balance:
 * Tone is appropriate and unbiased

Sources and references:
 * I noticed there are a couple of sources from UpToDate. I wanted to use this source as well but was worried that not everyone would have access to it. Also, when I tried to add a source from UpToDate it would not let me. This may be something we should talk with Dr. Ewing about. UpToDate as the most reliable data on epidemiology for my paper so I am definitely an advocate for using it.

Organization:
 * I thought the article had good flow and was easy to follow. I really liked your use of subheadings under the headings to split up the information. Definitely made it easy on the eyes.

Images and media:
 * I know this is an unfinished product so I'm not sure if you were planning to add images, but I do think it would be great if you did! I know it's difficult to add images to Wikipedia but hopefully you can find at least one to show visually representation of Oligohydramnios or at least what amniotic fluid looks like on ultrasound.

Overall impressions:
 * You clearly put a lot of effort into this article and I think, even unfinished, it is very well done! Great job!

-- Hollireynolds7 (talk) 17:23, 9 November 2021 (UTC)