Talk:Olla v-nigrum

Feedback for Wikipedia Assignment
Hello! I am adding to your Wikipedia assignment 6. I generally changed a couple of the headings around. I relabeled the “Habitat” section as “Migration” and added a “seasonal” subsection, because I feel like you generally talk about where the beetle goes at a particular time of year. I also replaced the “diseases” section under “enemies”, since you mostly just talk about different types of fungi. I didn’t directly edit this because I wasn’t sure how to match up the information, but you are missing a citation. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Croujay (talk • contribs) 23:54, 8 April 2024 (UTC)

Feedback for Wikipedia assignment
I'm a student at WashU, and as part of the Behavioral Ecology 2024 Wiki Education Assignment, I wanted to give you some feedback on the Wikipedia page. I've sent in a Google document with edits regarding this article to the Wiki assignment, but overall, my suggestions centered around some very minor grammatical errors and considering rearranging some of the headers so paragraphs flow smoother with information connecting like a story. — Preceding unsigned comment added by Mikakipnisuser (talk • contribs) 23:54, 8 April 2024 (UTC)

Peer review
Hello! I am adding a peer review to your page as a part of the Wikipedia assignment 6. Overall, I thought your article was well-written. The information was well-presented and it covered a wide variety of details. I only made a few minor edits to the article. I made a fixed a few minor grammatical changes, and I also reworded a couple of sentences so they flowed a little more clearly. I also changed the headers in your article so that they all matched the capitalization standard where only the first word is capitalized. Finally, I added some hyperlinks to some terms throughout your article. Overall, great job! Angelina2024 (talk) 22:36, 10 April 2024 (UTC)

I thought this article was sectioned off well. I really liked how the paragraphs were split up and how well the article flowed. I added some information from an interesting article I found in both the Life Cycle and Food Resources Section. I added some links as well to clarify some terms in the article that may be unknown to a reader. I thought that the sentence structure was clear and needed little editing. The only other thing I would fix is that some of the information lacks proper citations. Otherwise, the article was written well!