Talk:Oman at the 2016 Summer Olympics/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 08:13, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Taking review MWright96 (talk) 08:13, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * Pass/Fail:

Lede

 * Think Oman and the 2016 Summer Olympics and flag bearer can be wikilinked
 * I had removed the ones from Oman and 2016 Summer Olympics per MOS:BOLDLINK / MOS:TITLEABSENTBOLD like your previous review at Laos at the 2012 Summer Olympics. I wikilinked flagbearer. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:07, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Fair :) MWright96 (talk) 20:03, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * Opening cermeony can be wikilinked to 2016 Summer Olympics opening ceremony
 * Done --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:07, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * "Overall, both Al-Harthi and Al-Balushi had the highest placing for Oman with their 26th place finish." - which specific events?
 * Clairifed --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:07, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Athletics (track & field)

 * Wikilink men's 100 metres to Athletics at the 2016 Summer Olympics – Men's 100 metres
 * Done --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:30, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * women's 100 metres should be linked to Athletics at the 2016 Summer Olympics – Women's 100 metres
 * Done --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:30, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * "qualifying time for the women's 100 metres.[24][18]" - refs in numerical order please
 * Flipped. Does it make sense even though the citations supports the sentence out of order? If you need me to flip the sentence too, let me know. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:30, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * It makes sense regardless of whether the citations are out of order or not MWright96 (talk) 20:03, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * "As Al-Alawi did not finish in the top two of her individual heat, Al-Alawi did not advance with her eighth place finish" - repetition of "Al-Alawi"
 * Nice catch! Reworded --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:30, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * "Al-Alawi did not advance with her eighth place finish." - clarification please
 * Would "did not advance to the next round" work? The next sentence says she did not advance past the heats. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:30, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * That will work MWright96 (talk) 20:03, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Shooting

 * Think the term quota place can be wikilinked to Olympic quota allocation system only on the first mention
 * Didn't know about that wikilink! Added. --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:39, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * "Al-Balushi made 381 points and reached her score requirement" - how about acculumated or scored instead?
 * Went with accumulated as I used scored with Al-Khatri --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:39, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * "With his points" - points total or points score
 * Good point :P Went with points total --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:39, 14 June 2021 (UTC)
 * "Al-Balushi scored 379 points during qualification at the 10m air pistol event." - think competition can be used instead of the word in bold for variety
 * Went with Olympic competition --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 17:39, 14 June 2021 (UTC)

Tables

 * Both tables should be MOS:DTT compliant and fully referenced
 * Did. Also renamed headers for athletics/updated Al-Harthi --MrLinkinPark333 (talk) 20:58, 14 June 2021 (UTC)