Talk:On My First Sonne

Comment
I believe you should check the poem over again as in the third line it is clearly not iambic pentameter but iambic sestameter
 * Moved text from article page -- MightyWarrior (talk) 11:28, 8 February 2008 (UTC)

I don't think so, he would have intended it to read like this:

[Seven] [yeeres] [tho'wert] [lent] [to] [me], [and] [I] [thee] [pay] 'Sev'n/yeers/tho'ert'   ""

—Preceding unsigned comment added by 81.137.248.203 (talk • contribs) 12:08, 17 January 2008 I agree that he ment to write it like that, maybe to catch our attention. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 70.225.178.144 (talk) 04:55, 18 January 2010 (UTC)

Comparison of poems on Jonson's son and daughter
Please annotate or remove the last sentence:

"It is clearly different from the poem written about his daughter's death, which does not show the loss on such an intense level." Sbioggio (talk) 05:16, 5 July 2022 (UTC)