Talk:On a Very Special Episode.../GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 14:52, 29 August 2021 (UTC)
 * "Vision then reverts Abilash back to Norm." – 'revert' and 'back' are the same thing; reword.
 * "the entire decade of 1980s sitcoms were" "the entire decade of 1980s sitcoms was" (American English)
 * "it show's Vision's vulnerability" – typo?
 * "Olsen's "unrestrained '80s curls" in the episode was" "Olsen's "unrestrained '80s curls" in the episode were" (American English)
 * Remove the comma after "struggled to not make it too slow" since the sentence is quite short.
 * "said unlike" sounds off. Maybe add a "that" between or rephrase.
 * "less jokes" "fewer jokes"
 * Mark references from Rolling Stone with "|url-access=limited".
 * Mark references from Vulture with "|url-access=limited".
 * Ping when done. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 16:16, 4 September 2021 (UTC)
 * all points have been addressed. - Favre1fan93 (talk) 16:25, 4 September 2021 (UTC)