Talk:On the Run Tour (Beyoncé and Jay-Z)/GA1

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Reviewer: Calvin999 (talk · contribs) 09:32, 5 February 2015 (UTC)


 * Lead
 * I would write that Beyonce is a performer, not singer.
 * ❌ - I can do this, but it seems a bit iffy. She is a singer first and foremost, just as Jay-Z is a rapper. It is up to you here. ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)
 * She's not just a singer, though. Because she is a dancer, choreographer etc. all the things that she does with the show, it's more accurate to say performer for Beyonce. If it was Mariah, you would say singer and songwriter. If it was Celine, you would say singer. If it was Rihanna, you would say recording artist. —  ₳aron  09:45, 7 March 2015 (UTC)
 * ✅ - all complete now! ThirdWard (talk) 10:51, 7 March 2015 (UTC)


 * State who's solo tour is whose
 * ✅ ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)


 * found in Jay-Z's album → included on Jay-Z's album
 * ✅ ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)


 * in which Beyoncé features. → on which Beyoncé features.
 * ✅ ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)


 * Commercially, the tour was a success → The tour became a commercial success,
 * ✅ ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)


 * topping out → totalling
 * ✅ ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)


 * Background
 * number one hit → number-one song


 * "Part II (On the Run)" needs to be linked
 * ✅ ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)


 * Beyoncé's fifth studio album, Beyoncé →Beyoncé's self-titled fifth album
 * ✅ ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)


 * Promotion
 * April 28, 2014 → comma after 2014
 * ✅ ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)


 * Pre sale needs to be hyphenated
 * ✅ ThirdWard (talk) 23:43, 6 March 2015 (UTC)

On hold —  ₳aron  21:52, 6 March 2015 (UTC)
 * Passing —  ₳aron  10:57, 7 March 2015 (UTC)