Talk:One57/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 23:30, 1 July 2021 (UTC)

Comments

 * Short description goes at the top.
 * Add alt text to every image being used.
 * "roof height at 1,004 feet" "roof height of 1,004 feet"
 * Add a comma after "shape, of the building".
 * "leaf walls, white-oak" "leaf walls, a white-oak"
 * "an arts and crafts space" "arts and crafts space"
 * "wash room" should be written as one word.
 * Remove the comma after "following August".
 * "The plans called a" "The plans called for a"
 * Add a serial comma after "Abu Dhabi International Bank".
 * Add a hyphen between "class action".
 * "work site" should be one word.
 * "measuring measuring" - remove the double word.
 * Add "the" before "parent company".
 * "attracted from" - shouldn't this be "attracted to"?
 * Add a comma before Michael Dell.
 * "in spite of" "despite" (less wordy)
 * "president Elizabeth Goldstein" "President Elizabeth Goldstein"
 * Wikilink Christopher Gray and Michael Kimmelman.
 * USA TODAY USA Today
 * Wall Street Journal The Wall Street Journal
 * Sort categories in alphabetical order.

Progress

 * Thanks. I have fixed all of these now. Epicgenius (talk) 01:27, 8 July 2021 (UTC)