Talk:One More Cup of Coffee (Valley Below)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Ippantekina (talk · contribs) 12:39, 7 September 2022 (UTC)

Lead

 * "Dylan said the song was 'probably' influenced by" "probably" should be in quotation marks; alas, "probably" may be redundant anyways
 * Removed "probably". BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 12:14, 10 September 2022 (UTC)

Background and recording

 * "his first releases to achieve this" does this mean it was his first two albums that reached No. 1?
 * I've tweaked this a bit, and added which albums. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:36, 10 September 2022 (UTC)
 * A link to Hebraic (or a wikitionary link) could be useful
 * I've linked it - in the text following the quote rather than in the quote, per MOS:LINKQUOTE
 * Link Andalusian chord progression
 * Linked. (In the quote this time, as no other opportunity).) 13:36, 10 September 2022 (UTC)
 * "Stoner told interviewer" the interviewer
 * Fixed. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:36, 10 September 2022 (UTC)

Live performances

 * No issues.

Critical reception

 * ""sing not so much with as AT each other"" I think this is more mixed/negative than positive
 * I've added to this, which hopefully shows it was a positive review. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:36, 10 September 2022 (UTC)

Cover versions

 * Link spaghetti western
 * Done. BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:36, 10 September 2022 (UTC)

Overall

 * Putting this for seven days. Ippantekina (talk) 11:08, 10 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Many thanks, . I've replied above. Let me know if anything else is required. Regards, BennyOnTheLoose (talk) 13:36, 10 September 2022 (UTC)
 * Thanks for addressing my comments. Passing now-- Ippantekina (talk) 05:15, 11 September 2022 (UTC)