Talk:One Sweet Day/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: Xwomanizerx (talk) 20:28, 6 November 2010 (UTC)

Lead
 * I can't find any references for "Critics felt the video choice was wise, and agreed that the simple concept paid homage to the song's selfless message." in the music video section.

Background
 * Looks good.

Composition
 * Link to chord progression and common time.

Critical reception
 * Change the "On "One Sweet Day," -> "On 'One Sweet Day,'

Commercial performance
 * (The former song shares this record -> The parenthesis is not closed.
 * have two consecutive singles debut at number one -> Change number one for at the top tof the chart.
 * The son -> The song.
 * by the RIAA > by the Recording Industry Association of America (RIAA).

Awards and accolades
 * Why are award shows between apostrophes?

Live performances
 * Same about the tours between apostrophes.

Music video
 * didn't -> did not.

Cover versions
 * Looks good.

Charts
 * Looks good.

There are three disambiguation links. Also, the images have no alternate text, something I forgot in my review for Butterfly. Good job, thanks for reviewing the GH:MP DVD! :). Xwomanizerx (talk) 20:28, 6 November 2010 (UTC)


 * No problem! Thank you for the review. I believe I fixed everything :)-- CallMe Nathan  &bull;  Talk2Me   21:49, 6 November 2010 (UTC)
 * Great! I'm passing this. Xwomanizerx (talk) 22:06, 6 November 2010 (UTC)