Talk:One by One (Cher song)/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:31, 2 September 2023 (UTC)

I will get on with this right away today! --K. Peake 07:31, 2 September 2023 (UTC)

(Criteria marked are unassessed)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a. (prose, spelling, and grammar):
 * b. (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a. (reference section):
 * b. (citations to reliable sources):
 * c. (OR):
 * d. (copyvio and plagiarism):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a. (major aspects):
 * b. (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a. (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales):
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * b. (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/fail:
 * Pass/fail:

Infobox and lead
✅
 * adult contemporary should not be capitalised in the infobox
 * Pipe R&B to Contemporary R&B in above
 * Replace hlist with bullet points per Template:Infobox song
 * Add the co-written part to the second sentence with the two versions recorded part since they wrote both of them too
 * rock and adult contemporary needn't be capitalised
 * Pipe DJ to Disc jockey
 * "released "One by One" as" → "released the song as"
 * Remove the after part since that is not notable for lead
 * "as It's a Man's World's lead single" → "as the lead single"
 * "the single was met with positive reviews" → "the song received positive reviews"
 * "In the United Kingdom, it reached" → "In the UK, the song reached"
 * "top ten." → "top 10." per MOS:NUM and mention the name of the chart
 * "where it barely cracked the" → "barely cracking the"
 * "singing the track from" → "singing the song from"

Background

 * "She starred in" → "she starred in" per this being part of the same sentence
 * "Having turned down films" → "having turned down films" though the quote says infomercial diva instead and the other two parts are not sourced
 * '''Source 1 (NYT, Queen of the comebacks) - "...an embarrassing interlude as an infomercial queen" Source 3 EW - "...just devastating to my career"


 * Why is there [] for the infomercials when that is part of the original quote?
 * "career", she recalled." → "career", Cher recalled."
 * Where is the commercial failure sourced?
 * Source 1 (NYT, Queen of the comebacks)- "...died at the box office two weeks after it opened last April"

✅
 * "She came to" → "Cher came to" and add the year for If These Walls Could Talk
 * "Her first studio album since 1991's Love Hurts, Cher saw" → "The record was Cher's first studio album since 1991's Love Hurts; she saw"
 * "of challenging herself;" → "of challenging herself,"
 * "of bored with it"." → "of bored with it.""
 * Pipe covers to Cover version
 * "and The Real People member" → "and the Real People member" per MOS:THEMUSIC

Composition and remix
✅
 * rock and adult contemporary should not be capitalised on the audio sample text
 * Pipe R&B to Contemporary R&B on the sample text
 * ""One by One" has been described" → "Musically, "One by One" has been described"
 * rock and adult contemporary should not be capitalised
 * "It begins with" → "The song begins with"
 * Remove overly obvious wikilink on guitars
 * "In the refrain she sings" → "In the refrain, she sings"
 * [8][6] should be in numerical order
 * Pipe R&B to Contemporary R&B
 * "as they felt it would" → "as they felt the version would"
 * Pipe DJ to Disc jockey

Release and promotion
✅
 * Wikilink music video on the img text
 * "as well as her own" → "and her own"
 * "In the United States, it was released on May 21 as" → "In the US, it was released on May 21, 1996, as" per MOS:US
 * Wikilink lead single
 * Pipe Billboard to Billboard (magazine)
 * "In the United States," → "In the US,"
 * [6][11] should only be at the end of the sentence and in numerical order
 * Remove overly obvious wikilink on Los Angeles

Critical

 * "that the original version was" → "that the original version is"
 * Remove pipe on Billboard
 * "opined it was a" → "opined the song is a"
 * "sweet as can be"." → "sweet as can be."" per MOS:QUOTE on full sentences
 * "said it was one of" → "said the song is one of"
 * "PopMatters Peter Piatkowski highlighted its" → "PopMatters' Peter Piatkowski highlighted the"

Commercial
✅
 * [26] should be invoked after June 15, 1996 instead
 * "for fourteen weeks in total." → "for 14 weeks in total." per MOS:NUM
 * "It found more success on the" → "It found more success on the US"
 * "at number 6 and 7," → "at numbers six and seven,"
 * "came in at number 9." → "came in at number nine."
 * "where it reached" → "where the song reached"
 * "In the United Kingdom," → "In the UK,"
 * "her first top ten hit" → "her first top 10 hit"
 * "chart it came in" → "chart, it came in"

Track listings and formats

 * Good

Credits and personnel

 * Good

Weekly charts

 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION
 * Add Cash Box in brackets instead – ✅ by

Year-end charts

 * See MOS:TABLECAPTION

Final comments and verdict

 * until all of the issues are fixed; quite a smooth article and ensuing review! --K. Peake 11:30, 2 September 2023 (UTC)
 * Thanks for yet another great review ! I believe I have fixed everything you've pointed out; let me know if i've missed anything --Christian (talk) 21:40, 2 September 2023 (UTC)
 * ✅ now, I did some copy editing but this looks great! --K. Peake 16:41, 3 September 2023 (UTC)