Talk:Onefinestay

Article included in Talk page?
I notice that a previous editor has included almost an entire version of the page in the Talk. This should be deleted as it's unnecessary and obscures the actual discussion here. Edwardjones76 (talk) 22:48, 26 July 2018 (UTC)

I've had a tinker with the structure of this article to make it more readable. The intro has been shrunk accordingly and the relevant info put into the main body of the article under suitable category headlines.

However... this article still needs work. I didn't want to perform the structural changes at the same time as addressing issues of neutrality due to the threat of revision of the whole lot based on a difference of opinion! The changes I've made with my edit today shouldn't be contentious.

What needs to be addressed IMO Nonrevolver (talk) 02:34, 21 February 2013 (UTC)
 * 1) The "Origins" section reads like a puff piece and should be revised.
 * 2) The "Disadvantages" section is an unattributed rant and should probably be removed if it can't be verified. If it can be verified, it should be rewritten for POV and filed under "Reception" with the media praise.

Hi there,

I work and onefinestay and have made quite a few changes to this Wikipedia page as a lot of it was old information and had not been updated in sometime. All information has been cited with supporting articles to verify it and I have shown the edits below.

I'm deleting the article content you've copied into Talk. It's not necessary to show edits in Talk; edits are automatically recorded in the page's history. Edwardjones76 (talk) 01:06, 12 August 2018 (UTC)