Talk:Online Gravity (book)

Feedback from New Page Review process
I left the following feedback for the creator/future reviewers while reviewing this article: This was a pretty good article overall, but some future suggestions: Check out the edits I made to the article to see these tips and others in action..
 * 1) Don't use bare URLs; fill in proper citations
 * 2) It would be helpful to expand on the reception section and not just say "the book was reviewed by foo, bar, and baz"

* Pppery * it has begun... 02:37, 6 August 2022 (UTC)