Talk:Ons Jabeur/GA1

GA Review
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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 16:09, 1 March 2020 (UTC)

Going to review this article. MWright96 (talk) 16:09, 1 March 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) It is reasonably well written.
 * a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
 * 1) It is factually accurate and verifiable.
 * a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources):  c (OR):
 * 1) It is broad in its coverage.
 * a (major aspects): b (focused):
 * 1) It follows the neutral point of view policy.
 * Fair representation without bias:
 * 1) It is stable.
 * No edit wars, etc.:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
 * Pass/Fail:
 * 1) It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
 * a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
 * 1) Overall:
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 * Pass/Fail:

Lead

 * The first mention of No. should be converted to read as No.
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 01:44, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

Early life and background

 * "She grew up in the bigger nearby coastal town of Sousse." - larger
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:28, 3 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "a national sport high school" - not so sure that this is the correct way to spell this out
 * Which part? "Lycee sportif" basically translates to "sport high school". Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:28, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

Junior career

 * As with the first query in the lead section, the first mention of No. should be converted to read as No.
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:29, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

2008–12: WTA debut

 * Wikilink wild card to [[Wild card (sports)]
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:34, 3 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "She was also given a wild card into qualifying at the Dubai Tennis Championships the following week." - the qualifying competition
 * I think you forgot to finish this one? Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:34, 3 March 2020 (UTC)
 * Added. MWright96 (talk) 06:39, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

2013–16: Steady in the top 200 at the ITF level

 * "She entered qualifying at Wimbledon and the US Open," - how about entered the qualifying competitions instead?
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:32, 3 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "and did not win any titles in 2015." - and no titles in 2015.
 * Changed the sentence a bit to "Her only ITF title in 2014 came at a $25K event in Tunis, and she did not win any titles in 2015." Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:32, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

2017–18: Top 100 debut, and then first WTA final

 * "With this title, she also earned a wildcard" - should that be spelt as wild card to be consistent?
 * Yes. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 01:44, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

2019–20: Grand Slam quarterfinal, top 50 debut

 * "She defeated three players including No. 36, Yulia Putintseva" - not mentioned in the WTA Tennis source attached to it
 * Added match history as a source. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 05:24, 3 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "In February 2020, Jabeur continued her progress and reached the second round of the Dubai Tennis Championships, where she lost to Simona Halep, despite having a match point in the third set tiebreak." - none of this is mentioned in the Romania Insider source so another reference that mentions all of this information is needed to replace it
 * Replaced source. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 05:24, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

Fed Cup

 * "that also included Mexico, China, and Germany." - the countries mentioned here should be wikilinked to their respective Fed Cup team articles
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:49, 3 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "Tunisia ultimately did not participate in Fed Cup in 2014 or 2015," - in the Fed Cup
 * For some reason, it is standard to leave out the "the" here. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 01:45, 3 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "which was concurrent with Tunisia's one-year ban from Davis Cup" - from the Davis Cup
 * Same as above. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 01:45, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

Olympics

 * Jabeur also represented Tunisia in singles at the London Olympic Games in 2012 in London" - the text in bold is redundant since London is already mentioned beforehand
 * Removed. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 01:44, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

Playing style

 * Wikilink drop shot and forehands for non-Tennis readers
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:35, 3 March 2020 (UTC)

Personal life

 * "a Russian-Tunisian former fencer who has also served as her fitness coach since 2017." - you can clarify that it was mid-2017 as stated in the GQ Middle East source
 * Done. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:48, 3 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "Her favorite tennis player as a child was Andy Roddick." - The WTA Tennis source attached to this does state why Roddick is her favorite player if you believe that information would help
 * I left it out because it varies a little bit in other sources. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:48, 3 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "She plays football recreationally, and is a fan of Real Madrid CF." - WTA Tennis states that she supports Real Madrid but not that she plays it recreationally
 * Added a source. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:48, 3 March 2020 (UTC)
 * "At the tournament, she entered the main draw as a lucky loser and won her first two career Grand Slam main draw matches." - not so sure of the relevance of this information in the personal life section. It could be better to remove it since it is mentioned in the 2017-18 sub-section
 * I abbreviated it to only include the last part. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 04:48, 3 March 2020 (UTC)